Thursday, February 11, 2010

Fallen by Lauren Kate

Plot Summary: There's something achingly familiar about Daniel Grigori. Mysterious and aloof, he captures Luce Price's attention from the moment she sees him on her first day at the Sword & Cross boarding school in sultry Savannah, Georgia. He's the one bright spot in a place where cell phones are forbidden, the other students are all screw-ups, and security cameras watch every move. Even though Daniel wants nothing to do with Luce--and goes out of his way to make that very clear--she can't let it go. Drawn to him like a moth to a flame, she has to find out what Daniel is so desperate to keep secret...even if it kills her.

Fallen angels are making a big splash in YA books. There was much talk and hype over this one, both before and after its release. The cover is beautiful and the summary is compelling, setting the bar pretty high, and I was really looking forward to reading it because the idea sounds amazing. The story is basically forbidden love, which can often be gripping enough to overshadow any flaws in the telling of it. Unfortunately, for me, the flaws were too big to hide in the shadows...

The pacing is agonizingly slow. I found the plot predictable and lacking in continuity – many things happened with no logical explanation, and the fact that Luce didn't try harder to learn what was going on made her seem shallow and unlikeable. It felt like the author was withholding information in order to increase tension, but it came off as contrived.

As with all my book discussions, there are a few SPOILERS below.

As I read, there were so many things I questioned, pulling me out of the story:
-Why does Penn bring Luce to the records room when she can go herself and then tell Luce what she finds?
-Why doesn't Luce wonder why Daniel keeps initiating conversations with her when he also keeps telling her to go away? Makes him seem unstable.
-What were Luce’s experiences with the shadows like when she was growing up? How has it changed between now and then (she tells us that it changes, but not how)?
-Why is Todd's memorial in the cemetery instead of in a more appropriate venue, like an assembly hall? And why aren't Todd's parents there?
-What are the details about Luce’s encounter with Trevor? Since she has a parole officer, that means she was convicted of something. What?

All of these questions made the plot seem contrived and confusing. In some places, the story contradicted itself (the court ‘strongly suggested’ Luce attend Sword and Cross vs. the court ordered her to attend), and in other places information was withheld in order to force the reader to keep going. I understand that the author must manipulate the reader in order to hold his interest, but, for me, this manipulation was too heavy handed.

The entire story stays on the surface of everything. For example, Luce's continued feeling that she knows Daniel from somewhere. This feeling never goes beyond some of his facial expressions. She has supposedly known him for thousands of years, and she doesn't have a single epiphany about things he likes? She would have gotten to know him on some level, and should have inexplicably known a couple of his pet peeves, bad habits, or at least one thing he loved (other than her). But the furthest she gets is thinking she has seen him somewhere, somehow convinced she's in love with him. But her idea of love (can’t keep herself from kissing him because he’s so hot) is the textbook definition of lust. Love is about the person, but lust is about what the person looks like.

My biggest problem, though, was with Luce's parents. Luce paints them as loving parents who are just trying to do what's best for their daughter. If that was true, they NEVER would have run out on her at the hospital the way they did. That, to me, makes them seem like the thinnest cardboard cutouts I have ever seen in a story.

Overall, this is not a book I recommend, and I am not compelled to read any further in the series.

9 comments:

1inseveralbillion said...

I'm 1/3 of the way into the book and I feel so disconnected with the characters and I hate Luce's character! I'm a slow reader therefore slow pace + slow reader = extremely slow. Good point about the lust - I feel Luce is so attracted to the looks of guys and not their personality! Lol, I don't think I'll ever finish this book because I get more frustrated with each page :S

Tabitha said...

Yeah, I never felt connected to the characters, either. They were too shallow for my taste. And I agree that the slow pacing was agonizing. :)

I honestly tried to come up with something good to say about this story, but the best I could do was that it's a good idea.

Yunaleska said...

It's a good review considering how you feel about it. Truthful reviews are important.

I liked it, but I do a gree with a few of your comments.

Tabitha said...

Thanks. :) I tried really hard to be fair and constructive.

I am glad you enjoyed it, though. I am glad so many people are enjoying it, actually. It's always wonderful when books do well! :)

Yunaleska said...

:) Sometimes I don't like a book which everyone seems to adore. I'm glad we're all different!

Bish Denham said...

Thank you. Another book I don't have to add to my horrendously long list!

Tabitha said...

Yuna - me too! :)

Bish - I think TBR piles multiply themselves. It's the only way I can explain my towering pile. :)

Paola said...

This book is amazing!!! I loved all the characters! Especially Daniel Grigori. He is mysterious and sweet at the same time! :) And for all you haters out there, DONT READ THE BOOK! THERE'S REALLY NO POINT! If you dont like fallen angels or mysterious guys that keep you guessing for like half of the book, DONT READ IT! But if your willing to give it a shot, then go ahead! :) If you dont like it, then dont go on a website and write stupid things about it!!

Tabitha said...

Okay...it's not possible to know if I'll hate something unless I read it. :)

I honestly wanted to like this book. I kept reading because I wanted it to get better so I could enjoy it. But that didn't happen, so instead I tried to learn from it. *shrug*

I'm glad you liked it, though.