tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post2827426202070854678..comments2023-12-26T09:58:45.306-06:00Comments on Writer Musings: 500 Word Critique: MG FantasyTabithahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17420910182752981979noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-53812720964870702452012-09-10T11:16:45.159-05:002012-09-10T11:16:45.159-05:00As always, great critique comments, Tabitha.As always, great critique comments, Tabitha.Kelly Hashwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936313159809041986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-25352536973021317082012-09-10T08:29:34.837-05:002012-09-10T08:29:34.837-05:00Agreed -- that section ends on a great 'hanger...Agreed -- that section ends on a great 'hanger' and has me very curious to know what is in the note and where those four girls came from. Good intro, lots of mystery.Nickiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14509263760472428391noreply@blogger.com