tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post1433821790619726630..comments2023-12-26T09:58:45.306-06:00Comments on Writer Musings: 500 Word Critique: YA ParanormalTabithahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17420910182752981979noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-42354476570205793292011-02-20T17:48:13.126-06:002011-02-20T17:48:13.126-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.S. A. Soule, Creativity Coachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07345161433926665847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-33794798745377736802011-02-05T18:34:34.824-06:002011-02-05T18:34:34.824-06:00Great critique. I always read these and get ideas ...Great critique. I always read these and get ideas how to change what I've written. Kudos to the writer for submitting it and letting us see this process!Mary Witzlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06458299046574564155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-6268256360093818382011-02-01T18:29:02.551-06:002011-02-01T18:29:02.551-06:00Thanks again for the feedback and helpful suggesti...Thanks again for the feedback and helpful suggestions. <br /><br />I feel there is ALWAYS room for improvement. I've made a few changes based on your edits and hopefully it is more vivid and palpable.<br /><br />I always strive to make my first line, paragraph, and chapter hook the reader into the story by showing the character's conflict.S. A. Soule, Creativity Coachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07345161433926665847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-36306191140558158712011-01-31T19:10:23.853-06:002011-01-31T19:10:23.853-06:00I like this author's bravery! And I loved her ...I like this author's bravery! And I loved her passage and your edits! Maybe I will work up the courage to have you do a passage of mine!Michelle Flickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11452307689508498982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-36092861044254128732011-01-31T10:31:03.050-06:002011-01-31T10:31:03.050-06:00Very interesting. I enjoyed your comments as well,...Very interesting. I enjoyed your comments as well, and agreed with almost all of them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-55832202342824364662011-01-31T07:47:20.523-06:002011-01-31T07:47:20.523-06:00The author gave me permission to identify her, and...The author gave me permission to identify her, and even provided a link to the entire first chapter. I've just added it, so if you want to read more then you can!Tabithahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17420910182752981979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-60905377375153928972011-01-31T07:30:26.659-06:002011-01-31T07:30:26.659-06:00I really liked this. I agree with a little more de...I really liked this. I agree with a little more depth this coudl be a fantastic piece. I really enjoyed it want to read on.Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.com