tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post2227359397605258165..comments2023-12-26T09:58:45.306-06:00Comments on Writer Musings: Fiction Fun: WIPTabithahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17420910182752981979noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-10990091719064175742012-07-31T14:23:38.472-05:002012-07-31T14:23:38.472-05:00Good hook! You got me interested in knowing what i...Good hook! You got me interested in knowing what is his story, what's this leading up to? What's the dilemma going to be? :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-59430129888208595162012-07-31T14:05:00.115-05:002012-07-31T14:05:00.115-05:00posting an excerpt is a great idea. Best of luck ...posting an excerpt is a great idea. Best of luck with the final push!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-62726087709314273512012-07-31T08:24:30.869-05:002012-07-31T08:24:30.869-05:00Great voice, I'd love to read this!Great voice, I'd love to read this!Ruth Donnellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12305109099610123918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-74520232067707312682012-07-30T21:27:20.113-05:002012-07-30T21:27:20.113-05:00A boy name, brilliant and stubborn, can't go w...A boy name, brilliant and stubborn, can't go wrong with this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04792547098577357461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-50298902078150901002012-07-30T16:06:27.830-05:002012-07-30T16:06:27.830-05:00Cool! I like novels about smart kids.Cool! I like novels about smart kids.Catherine Stinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08131569196977321229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-83908739917143622012-07-30T16:03:00.886-05:002012-07-30T16:03:00.886-05:00What a neat character. I bet his story will be int...What a neat character. I bet his story will be interesting. Good luck.Beverly Stowe McClurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02176195451841801819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-62342987368883233462012-07-30T11:33:26.004-05:002012-07-30T11:33:26.004-05:00Sounds like Todd is an interesting character.Sounds like Todd is an interesting character.Kelly Hashwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936313159809041986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-77270272780935245952012-07-30T11:22:30.387-05:002012-07-30T11:22:30.387-05:00Nice! I'd be interested in reading more.Nice! I'd be interested in reading more.angel011https://www.blogger.com/profile/02603101632272208797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-78237981098640075292012-07-30T10:05:27.195-05:002012-07-30T10:05:27.195-05:00Sounds like you have some interesting characters h...Sounds like you have some interesting characters here.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01052604405996474436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401296522737471037.post-15719415855082583232012-07-30T10:04:19.503-05:002012-07-30T10:04:19.503-05:00Ooh, great beginning! It really drew me in!Ooh, great beginning! It really drew me in!Ann Herrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06041353495884375883noreply@blogger.com